Paste yours. Find the one line they keep.
For anyone whose words have to land. His were an answer to a friend asking what was new.
Before“I am starting basketball on my leave of work.”
After“I am playing basketball on my leave of work.”
Three cold readers heard the sport, and no scene. Stories scored 1 of 10.
1 line changed. The rest stayed his.
or drop a .txt or .md file
One line: who reads it, and what should they do, feel, or remember?
Your words run through the panel once. Then they are gone. Nothing is stored.
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Not ready to paste yours? See six real panel runs first.
Shapes to start from. Not your text.
We don't write it for you. You stay the author.
1. Readers score. Three cold readers score your words.
They never talk to each other.
2. You get starts. You get the core, six scores, and small strong starts.
3. No rewrite. We don't write it for you.
You stay the author.
The SUCCESs checklist comes from Made to Stick.
By Chip Heath and Dan Heath.
Three studies back these checks.
Tversky and Shafir, 1992.
Loewenstein, 1994.
Paivio, 1971.
We test this tool against plain AI.
Scores post here once tests run.
This tool is independent.
The authors did not endorse it.
The publisher did not endorse it.
We have no tie to them.